Wk 6 - Intervention

Intervention affected my writing a little bit while preparing for my Lit Snap Assignment. The peer response we did in class helped a lot for preparing for this paper. While we had the chance to read each others papers out loud, it helped one another get a better perspective on how we should change our wording. For example, we would tell our partners, “I think it would be better for you to add more dialogue.” By adding more dialogue to your paper, the reader will understand your emotions and feelings towards your writing. Nobody has really told me to start my paper with outlining. I’ve always been doing outlining while preparing for my papers. The only problem I had with writing was to put things in order correctly and give a specific detail or example supporting my statement. For my paper, it was hard for me to tell how I felt about what has happened and give a supporting detail. There was so much information that was given and it was complicated to put me in for the situation and show how I would feel for what has happened. It’s easier for me to give someone else advice on their paper, instead of my own, because I think of better ideas for their paper because there’s more-developed than mine and makes much more sense. I like getting the feedback from others though after they read my paper and give me a better perspective; but I just wish I could develop the paper better in the first place. So by doing this Lit Snap Assignment it has changed my writing a lot and I hope it improves down the road.